movieguru88 Here are the problems I have with this short film: 1.) SILENT MOVIE!!?? - Granted creative, but with the supposed plot that's going on I'm having trouble interpreting the situations. Dianne only says two lines and that's it. 2.) The Characters - Both Con...  moreHere are the problems I have with this short film: 1.) SILENT MOVIE!!?? - Granted creative, but with the supposed plot that's going on I'm having trouble interpreting the situations. Dianne only says two lines and that's it. 2.) The Characters - Both Conrad and Dianne are generic and boring. Why did Dianne skip after talking with Conrad. Is she that perky? Also, Conrad is nothing but a one-dimensional character. No depth what-so-ever. Is he from another world? Is he psychotic? and finally 3.) The Message - What central idea or message was the short film trying to give? Other than Conrad is a generic antagonist. Positive sides - the cinematography and musical score was decent. Camera movement were not bad, but as for the rest I've listed, I'm sorry but I'm having trouble visually interpreting it.  less

RienKelsoCinema Thank you very much for your feedback. I understand the weaknesses in this film as I am trying to get better. I hope things pick up, I am a beginner with a long way to go.